diff --git a/texts/results-description.md b/texts/results-description.md
index c63a3b3..abebcb9 100644
--- a/texts/results-description.md
+++ b/texts/results-description.md
@@ -1 +1 @@
-When we looked at the endline exam data for students in grades 3 through 6, we found that these students had the highest literacy gains of all of the students in the study. The endline exam was administered by our team to 2,000 students, and the results were disaggregated to determine which regions performed best. Unfortunately, region 1 showed much less improvement than regions 2 or 3.
\ No newline at end of file
+Students in grades 3 through 6 had the highest literacy gains. We administered the endline exam to 2,000 students and disaggregated the results to determine which regions performed best. Region 1 showed much less improvement than regions 2 or 3.