@nniiicc -- here is the revived draft of the op-ed: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bj516qjgPzFqL5FsHHZM5UwVW0uOGkwKjkHf81Ludkk/edit
there are a few places where I need to go back and add citations. main points for feedback are:
- voice -- which sections / pghs are boring or should be simplified? I think describing results might be too much, lmk what you think
- conclusion and notes for reframing -- the conclusion is not that strong - depending on how we pitch this, I'd add a last sentence like "regulate Uber as an adult company" ...
@nniiicc -- here is the revived draft of the op-ed: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bj516qjgPzFqL5FsHHZM5UwVW0uOGkwKjkHf81Ludkk/edit
there are a few places where I need to go back and add citations. main points for feedback are: