fix(docs): let the hero copy be read - #98
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Three things were fighting the reader. The tagline set a full sentence in uppercase, which is slower to read and was standing in for presence that size supplies directly; it is now sentence case and larger. The mode strip did the same to a list of plain facts. And the dark scheme's radial went fully transparent at the centre while the vertical veil did not reach density until 75% down, so the wordmark sat on the busiest part of the mandala with nothing behind it. The veil now thickens through the band the copy occupies and leaves the artwork's top arc alone. zensical 0.0.32 -> 0.0.63, the fleet's most stale docs pin by a wide margin.
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Three things were fighting the reader on the landing page.
The tagline was a full sentence in uppercase. "FEDERATED LEARNING ON THE LATEST FLOWER, WITH OPENTELEMETRY-NATIVE OBSERVABILITY" across two lines. Caps slow reading down because they remove the word shapes we recognise, and here they were standing in for presence that font size can supply directly. Now sentence case, larger, with a real line-height.
The mode strip did the same to a list of facts.
flwr 1.36 Message API | federated LoRA | OTel traces + metricsis information, not a label, so it reads as information now.The wordmark had nothing behind it. The dark scheme's radial is
transparent 10%at the centre by design, and the vertical veil did not reach density until 75% down — but the copy begins around the midline. So "Phalanx" sat directly on the busiest part of the mandala. The veil now thickens through the band the copy actually occupies, and stops short of the artwork's top arc, which was never the problem.zensical0.0.32 -> 0.0.63. That was the fleet's most stale docs pin by a wide margin, 31 releases behind, hidden behind an unpinned specifier.Verification
zensical build --clean— "No issues found".Not in this PR
The artwork itself is still symmetric, which forces centred type and leaves no clean ground for a left-aligned column. Replacing it with an asymmetric image is a separate change, since new CSS against the current symmetric art would look worse rather than better.