Polish focused-preview public copy - #220
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Work intentphase: review
summary: "Fable's full editorial pass is integrated, pushed, and green; rendered owner QA is the remaining acceptance step."
touch-points:
- README.md
- docs/user/**/*.html
- doc/launch/issue-16/*.md
- test/docs-site.test.ts
- test/launch-assets.test.ts
done-when:
- "Fable's complete intended copy edit is committed on a child branch based on #217."
- "Exact-copy assertions are updated only where the new wording preserves their product contract."
- "The Pages inline demo transcript matches its canonical transcript."
- "Focused docs and launch tests, full ci:local, GitHub CI, and a rendered public-copy review pass."
excludes:
- "Product behavior, visual-design changes, and media recapture or re-encoding."
- "Changing release facts, repository settings, or publishing announcements."
- "Broad-announcement editorial work tracked separately by #84."
blocked-by:
- "#217"
may-block:
- "#205"
branch: "t3code/fable-public-copy-polish"Completion: Completed after three finding-bearing exact-head review rounds. Final head 8501a65 passed 934 tests and the packaged smoke test; it was squash-merged as d4d1d4a. Discretionary copy remained frozen; changes after QA were limited to factual workflow, privacy, and structural-name corrections. |
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* polish public preview copy * align public copy assertions * restore canonical and pane terminology * keep agent and privacy copy contract-accurate * narrow every local-data promise
* docs: plan Ember Light visual refresh * docs: align visual refresh plan with design brief * Stage sanitized public capture state (#210) * docs: define public capture contract * feat: stage sanitized public capture state * test: satisfy capture staging quality gates * Restyle public surfaces for Ember Light (#212) * style: align public tokens with Ember Light * docs: redraw current public product surfaces * use canonical public app branding * Recapture the current Ember Light product UI (#213) * docs: reserve one strongest product capture * docs: automate current product stills * fix: target the packaged capture renderer * fix: settle captures after hidden toasts * docs: replace product captures with Ember Light * fix: retain capture provenance after restack * Publish the preview demo and launch assets (#214) * chore: start demo and launch assets slice * docs: automate the focused preview demo * docs: show opening the captured review * docs: publish the focused preview demo * docs: finish the focused preview launch assets * test: tighten launch asset assertions * polish public preview typography * fix: retain demo capture provenance after restack * fix: identify Claude Code host examples * fix: use accessible public counter color * fix: reserve Ember orange for non-text accents * fix: carry preview boundary on demo end card * fix: activate unrecorded demo setup directly * docs: regenerate demo with preview boundary * Add Ember Dark to the public site (#217) * add Ember Dark public appearance * match public dark mode to Ember Dark * refine the public site at phone widths * stabilize the responsive footer * keep dark accents readable * keep dark button borders semantic * keep dark dialog and sidebar controls usable * collapse public navigation before controls crowd * Polish focused-preview public copy (#220) * polish public preview copy * align public copy assertions * restore canonical and pane terminology * keep agent and privacy copy contract-accurate * narrow every local-data promise * Stabilize public heading typography (#221) * stabilize the public hero heading * smooth the hero type breakpoint * restore lighter public heading weights * recapture stills from a retained source * recapture demo from a retained source * keep brand assets legible in Ember Dark * keep the mobile disclosure readable
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Outcome
Applies the late Fable editorial pass across Markover's complete focused-preview public surface.
Stack
t3code/public-ember-dark)mainafter this child and its prerequisites are accepted.Included
Boundary
This PR changes public-facing prose and corresponding content assertions only. It does not change product behavior, visual design, media binaries, release facts, repository settings, or publish announcements.
Validation
269b15e0.e4f3675.git diff --checkpasses.Tracks the final editorial prerequisite of #205 and the public-copy portion of #16.