Fundraising page: investor-feedback revision (Investor Preview, pitch arc, $15M ask) - #13
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Prioritized P1-P3 changes from Leyna/Toby/Delana feedback: single $15M ask below proof, Investor Preview retitle, named team block, section reorder to standard pitch arc, verified category-proof citations, trajectory diagram. Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Stage 1 ships raise-proof pricing/scale facts now; stage 2 adds model figures after the $15M re-model and review. Controller notes cover seed re-size, cap-table reconciliation, tariff line, and assumption pressure-tests. Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Six tasks: P1 mechanical fixes (incl. $25M leak in OG metadata), team block, pitch-arc reorder with gate boundary shift, narrative copy, trajectory diagram component, full verification. Copy-contract vitest guards invariants. Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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- Change 'at a record EBITDA margin' to 'at a record adjusted EBITDA margin' (line 346) to match cited source - Change 'Yoto grew 86% last year' to 'Yoto grew 86% in 2024' for precise dating (line 355) - Remove scaffolding comment about opening thesis QuoteBox (line 136) - Add assertions for 95M and in 2024 in category proof test - Harden hero test with header existence check Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Ask stays in Section V only — byline carries the wedge, not the number. Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
…e' sentence Replaces the announce-y 'That's the unlock' closer with Hugh's phrasing. Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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'AI that runs local', 'starting with families', 'Our First Device', diagram above the economics line, $15M box leads The Ask, restored prototype+demo CTA paragraph as the page closer. Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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…ext, cited CZI claim, demo-or-memo CTA Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Summary
Revises
/fundraisingper investor feedback from Leyna Chiang, Toby Shorin, and Delana Tran (triaged and prioritized indocs/superpowers/specs/2026-07-11-fundraising-page-feedback-design.md).P1 — red-flag removal
P2 — narrative restructure
docs/finance/2026-07-11-model-v2-controller-notes.md)P3
TrajectoryDiagramcomponent: three phases over the shared private-intelligence stack bar, above the askTesting
www/tests/fundraising-copy.test.ts, 13 tests) pins the invariants: single $15M after The Ask, no $25M/dateline/model figures, section order, gate boundary, citations🤖 Generated with Claude Code