Saunders 07 02 2026 - #1401
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Great work @zmjsaunders ! See the in-line comments for specific feedback. Let me know if I can clarify any of the below.
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| <change who="http://syriaca.org/documentation/editors.xml#dmichelson http://syriaca.org/documentation/editors.xml#dschwartz http://syriaca.org/documentation/editors.xml#wpotter" when="2026-06-24-05:00">CHANGED: Implemented revisions for the second edition, 2026.</change> |
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Don't forget to include the change element for you creating the file (the who attribute is your editors.xml URI, which you used in the editor and respStmt/name elements above, and the when attribute is the date you created the file)
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| <bibl xml:id="work-5505" type="lawd:ConceptualWork"> | ||
| <title xml:id="name5505-1" xml:lang="en" srophe:tags="#syriaca-headword">Book of the Dove</title> |
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Work titles need either a source attribute pointing to a bibl's xml:id (e.g., source="#bib5505-1") or a resp="http://syriaca.org" attribute
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| <bibl xml:id="work-5505" type="lawd:ConceptualWork"> | ||
| <title xml:id="name5505-1" xml:lang="en" srophe:tags="#syriaca-headword">Book of the Dove</title> | ||
| <author ref="https://syriaca.org/person/239" xml:lang="en">Gregory Bar Hebraeus<foreign xml:lang="syr">ܓܪܝܓܘܪܝܘܣܒܪ ܥܒܪܝܐ</foreign> |
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author elements also need a source or resp attribute, like in titles.
Also, careful with "https" vs "http", Syriaca URIs should use "http"
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| <idno type="URI">http://syriaca.org/work/5505</idno> | ||
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| <date>13th cent. CE</date> |
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Great! You can include as well the notBefore and notAfter attributes to give the standardized date range, e.g. "1200" and "1300"
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| <listBibl type="secondaryLiterature"> |
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If you have multiple bibls that are "secondary literature"/"citation", put them both in the listBibl of @type="secondaryLiterature" rather than creating a second listBibl. Think of the listBibl as a container grouping similar kinds of bibliography, or even different sections of a large bibliography.
Here, for instance, you'd put bib5505-2 below line 123, and can delete this second listBibl
| <desc xml:lang="en">This is not a comprehensive list of secondary literature related to this work. Further citations may be available through <ref target="http://syriaca.org/cbss">The Comprehensive Bibliography on Syriac Studies</ref>.</desc> | ||
| <bibl xml:id="bib5505-1" type="lawd:Citation"> | ||
| <title xml:lang="en">Christian Spiritual Sources in Barhebraeus’ Ethicon and the Book of the Dove</title> | ||
| <ptr target="https://syriaca.org/cbss/4ARYCKV2"/> |
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flagging the https -> http
| <desc xml:lang="en">This is not a comprehensive list of secondary literature related to this work. Further citations may be available through <ref target="http://syriaca.org/cbss">The Comprehensive Bibliography on Syriac Studies</ref>.</desc> | ||
| <bibl xml:id="bib5505-2" type="lawd:Citation"> | ||
| <title xml:lang="en">Book of the Dove: Ascetic Instructions by Gregory Bar Hebraeus</title> | ||
| <ptr target="https://syriaca.org/cbss/6BWM53YZ"/> |
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