More text fixes#62
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incorrect capitalization fix
facets -> faucets
remove quotation marks from the end of the descriptions, they were mostly missing ones at the beginning too and I don't think these are suppose to be in quotes because it's the player's thoughts, not someone speaking out loud
his -> [his of M]
add missing quotation mark
Remove extra punctuation (?. -> ?)
remove extra spaces, one of which was causing a ' to turn into "
minor grammar tweak
missing word
Capitalization fix for room names
grammar fix
capitalization fix + grammar changes to read a bit better
Move end quotation mark because currently it doesnt appear, add roman type so the following line is the right color, not sure if I put it in the right place here
remove extra space
remove extra As
remove redundant sentence - I believe this line always follows up him saying something along the same lines, so saying "that was incredible!" again here is not necessary
missing quotation mark
Trapquest -> TFQuest
highlight -> highlighting
wrong pronoun fix
Fix slutty sister speech here so it's pink instead of red
duplicate comma, goddessaddress already has one
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Making sure to do a better job this time of detailing the changes, doesn't need to be merged any time soon since I'm going to continue working on it