More text fixes

Trap Quest.inform/Inform/Extensions/Body Parts/Belly.i7x

@@ -1018,7 +1018,7 @@ To lay (X - a number) small eggs:
 
 To lay (X - a number) medium eggs:
 	if X < 10, say "[if X is 1]one[otherwise]one, then another[end if][if X > 2], then a third [variable custom style](owww!)[roman type][end if][if X > 3], then a fourth[end if][if X > 4], then a fifth[end if][if X > 5], then a sixth[line break][variable custom style](my poor [asshole] can't survive much more of this...)[roman type][line break][end if][if X > 6], then a seventh[end if][if X > 7], then an eighth[line break][variable custom style](there's no way this was all inside me...)[roman type][line break][end if][if X > 8], then a ninth[end if] full sized egg slowly emerges from your ever loosening [asshole], making a quiet 'plop' sound as [if X is 1]it[otherwise]each[end if] comes out.";
-	otherwise say "Full sized chicken-like eggs one by one force their way from your [asshole]. There are so many that you quickly lose count, it's at least ten but you really have no idea.";
+	otherwise say "full sized chicken-like eggs one by one force their way from your [asshole]. There are so many that you quickly lose count. It looks like at least ten, but you really have no idea.";
 	if the latex-transformation of the player < 3:
 		say "The [if X > 1]eggs are[otherwise]egg is[end if] much too big to be passed comfortably, and the ordeal inevitably stimulates your ass just as much as anal sex would.";
 		let E be a random medium egg;

Trap Quest.inform/Inform/Extensions/Clothing/Quests.i7x

@@ -2252,15 +2252,15 @@ An all later time based rule (this is the drone upload rule):
 				if doomed < 1:
 					say "The [ShortDesc of D] shoots out an antenna, only for it to immediately spit out sparks and explode like a popped balloon, leaving nothing but a cloud of smoke. Looks like it couldn't handle getting wet!";
 				otherwise:
-					say "The [ShortDesc of D] 's dilated pupil freezes in place, glowing bright pink for a second before disappearing in a puff of purple smoke. Looks like it got what it needed...";
+					say "The [ShortDesc of D]'s dilated pupil freezes in place, glowing bright pink for a second before disappearing in a puff of purple smoke. Looks like it got what it needed...";
 					complete upload of D;
 				reset D with flavour false;
 			otherwise if D is not uploading:
 				let P be the drone-poster of D;
 				now P is off-stage;
 				now D is uploading;
 				if doomed < 1, say "The antenna the [ShortDesc of D]'s back begins to blink in rapid succession. You have a feeling that if you don't find a way to overwrite it or disable the drone, that compromising picture it just took is going to get uploaded somewhere!";
-				otherwise say "The [ShortDesc of D]'s  pupil begins to move rapidly in all directions. You have a feeling that if you don't find a way to distract it, that compromising picture it just took is going to get uploaded somewhere!";
+				otherwise say "The [ShortDesc of D]'s pupil begins to move rapidly in all directions. You have a feeling that if you don't find a way to distract it, that compromising picture it just took is going to get uploaded somewhere!";
 			otherwise:
 				if the upload-progress of D > 7 * combatSpeed:
 					if doomed < 1, say "The [ShortDesc of D]'s antenna gives off one final, sustained blink before the entire thing explodes like a popped balloon, leaving behind nothing but a cloud of smoke. Looks like you lost your chance to stop the upload...";

Trap Quest.inform/Inform/Extensions/Monster Framework/Conversation.i7x

@@ -1639,7 +1639,7 @@ To say DismissalResponse of (M - a monster):
 		say DismissalResponseDefault of M.
 
 To say DismissalResponseRefused of (M - a monster):
-	say "[speech style of M]I've already said no.'[roman type][line break]".
+	say "[speech style of M]'I've already said no.'[roman type][line break]".
 
 To say DismissalResponseRoyal of (M - a monster):
 	say DismissalResponseDefault of M.
@@ -1793,7 +1793,7 @@ To say StoryQuestion of (M - a monster):
 		say "'What's your story?'".
 
 To say StoryAnswer of (M - a monster):
-	say "[speech style of M]'Trapquest.'[roman type][line break]".
+	say "[speech style of M]'TFQuest.'[roman type][line break]".
 
 talk-escape-question is a talk-object.
 

Trap Quest.inform/Inform/Extensions/Monster/Gargoyle.i7x

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ To compute appearance assessment of (M - gargoyle):
 	otherwise if H is a thing:
 		say "on your [ShortDesc of H].";
 	otherwise:[If she woke up because the player was horny, due to magic item, or the doom counter, she just stares at you]
-		say "on you, and [big he of M] stares at you in silence for several seconds.";
+		say "on you, and [he of M] stares at you in silence for several seconds.";
 	if M is objectifying the player or M is unfriendly:
 		say "[big his of M] wings unfurl as [he of M] steps down from the pedestal.";
 		anger M;

Trap Quest.inform/Inform/Extensions/Monster/Icarus.i7x

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Figure of Icarus interact 7 is the file "NPCs/Dungeon/Icarus/cutscene-Icarus-int
 Figure of Icarus interact 8 is the file "NPCs/Dungeon/Icarus/cutscene-Icarus-interact8.jpg".
 
 To say MonsterDesc of (M - Icarus):
-	say "This well-built [man of M] has two giant feathery wings rooted in [his of M] back. There's no doubt that [he of M][']s some kind of angel. [big his of M] calm thoughtful gaze gives [him of M] an air of intelligence and wisdom beyond the apparent age of [his of M] body, which looks about 25 years old.".
+	say "This well-built [man of M] has two giant feathery wings rooted in [his of M] back. There's no doubt that [he of M][']s some kind of angel. [big his of M] calm, thoughtful gaze gives [him of M] an air of intelligence and wisdom beyond the apparent age of [his of M] body, which looks about 25 years old.".
 
 To set up (M - Icarus):
 	reset M;